A very nice experiment, loving how smooth the animation is.
For a first timer, this is actually pretty good! Looking forward to see more of your content. :)
A very nice experiment, loving how smooth the animation is.
For a first timer, this is actually pretty good! Looking forward to see more of your content. :)
Thanks for the encouraging words.
Well, presentation was alright, but I felt the animation was a bit static. Good work either way.
It could've been better I understand. I gave it my best with what I had though, so I'm proud of it. Thanks for the compliment though :P
Pretty nostalgic, I finally have a reason to take the Clock Crew seriously.
Nicely done, MelloYelloClock!
Thank you.
Oh, man.
I'm at a lost of words right now-
post-Interstellar De Ja Vu? :D
It's highly unrecommended to submit unfinished works to the portal (especially sprite movies).
You have a better chance submitting this to the forums.
Oh, Ok thanks o_o
Umm, Where exactly in the forums?
Please refrain from uploading unfinished works.
Submit these works to the Dumping Grounds and to the 'Animation' forums in Newgrounds' BBS. You can find better feedback from there rather than the portal itself.
thanks. didn't know that to be honest. i will find out how to use that forum for feedback to unfinished work.
Quite the thought provoking flash. Although, I wished it would give clues to the viewer on where to click during pauses. I had to click everywhere whenever the movie stopped playing. I believe the movie was better off without the interactivity.
The surreal animation leaves a the viewer with a trailing thought. Quite mysterious, it was a pretty good watch.
I answered below my choice on interactivity. I said I "really liked the idea of the viewer controlling the pace of the animation, as well as basically clicking things to life -- and death". Therefore, I thought pointing out where to click wouldn't have any sense. I think it's not too hard to know, neither.
Thank you very much for your thoughts!
Pretty good!
The animation was solid, voice work was excellent. Movie was quite the feat... but I'd would steer clear from DBZ, considering it's pretty redundant here in NG.
excellent voice work ? i just yelled and grunted, didnt expected to read that opinion. so yeah, thanks!
...I have to admit, that was pretty painful to watch.
Pretty much the only piece of animation in this video was just the opening segment itself. The rest is just text and *cough* that song.
Sorry to be the bringer of bad news, it just doesn't fit well with Newgrounds, you'll have a better chance uploading this to some video streaming website or the like.
Dagnabbit, and I was hoping this video wouldn't get blammed. Dah well.
Well...
It's pretty short, DBZ sound effects has been done to death already. Animation is decent, but graphics needs a bit more improving. I could see you're just starting out and that's just fine. I would recommend going to the forums and submit this movie to the Dumping Grounds and showcase it there. From there, people can offer you criticism and feedback.
Good luck out there!
Thank you very much, means a lot! And yes, im just starting, i dont have good sources of sound effects, and i didnt put effort on the characters design, but i'll make them better, seriously thanks!
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