The animation's pretty simplistic, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, I couldn't understand most of it (mainly due me being a English speaker and all).
Regardless, a good first time submission! Keep it up!
The animation's pretty simplistic, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, I couldn't understand most of it (mainly due me being a English speaker and all).
Regardless, a good first time submission! Keep it up!
If you're seeking feedback, the portal isn't the right place. You'll have better luck in the forums than here.
Please try not to submit unfinished works to portal.
While I admit the animation's smooth, I'll be honest here, what's the point? To be frank, Madness animations have been done to death already, almost each iteration are just reskins from each other.
As for the flash submission itself, audio was absolutely choppy and feels incomplete. I don't mean to discourage you, but this could've been done better.
Thanks really helps a lot :D
Everything about this piece is just breath taking. I can't even put it into words! One of the main reasons why I try be the best I can be.
Totally worth all of my 5's.
If I said I was expecting that last part, I would be one 'nauseous' liar. Haha, bad pun..
Other than that, it was pretty entertaining! Work on your lines a bit more though!
Try to refrain from submitting incomplete works, especially clips to be used in a collab.
Other than that, I love your art style!
alright, thank you for telling me, I'm still new to newgrounds and I couldn t find something related to collab things, I will publish completed works in the future
It's a start. Keep it up.
I can relate to this on a spiritual level... pun unintented.
Great work!
Well, I guess it's something.
It's a nice start, but try to put completed works into the portal. If you seek critique or the like, post this over on the forums.
If I said I was expecting that, I'd be lying.
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