Oh gross.. that mental image is forever ingrained into my brain now. Still, nicely done. There's room for improvement but we all have to start from somewhere!
The animation is sound, the graphics could use some work though. Regardless, keep trying!
Oh gross.. that mental image is forever ingrained into my brain now. Still, nicely done. There's room for improvement but we all have to start from somewhere!
The animation is sound, the graphics could use some work though. Regardless, keep trying!
I got a few chuckles, I couldn't help myself haha-
A pretty bizarre animation, nice work!
Thank you!
Great work here!
Looking forward to this game of yours in the future.
Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed!
Let me get one thing straight with your comments below, you may gauge your audience but you may not control them. You're going to have to learn handle critiques, even the bad ones. With that said, let's get on to the movie.
It's relatively short, but I can relate to the context. (Even for a dweller like me, haha) Animation is smooth, and I'm loving the coloring! I'm kinda iffy about the ending card, Youtube lingo makes everything awkward here but linking to it is fine! (Otherwise, you'll just look damn desperate.)
Nice work, and I'm sure you can do better!
...An okay spoof of the original Eddsworld?
Humor is a bit tasteless but whatever. Keep trying.
I can agree with the latter, I don't understand art nowadays.
The graphics could use some work, but it's a great short either way! Keep trying!
Thanks man, I'm still learning how to use flash and how to draw on a computer, but I think I'm getting better!
Pretty interesting!
Surprising to know this took about three years to make!
Gotta love that Borderlands burn right there.
Excellent work, animation seems crisp and fluid! There are some oddities here and there but the humor allowed it to be put aside.
Hope to see more!
The portal isn't the best place for feedback or critique on unfinished works/experiments. Only finalized works are allowed. After all, would you really want to be known for that guy to have his userpage full of tests or demonstrations, or would you rather be known for finished and fine-tuned works?
The best place for critique would be the forums themselves, try the Animation forums instead of here. With that said, do make use of your free Dumping Grounds cloud storage for submission like these!
Hilarious! These guinea pigs never cease to amuse!
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