solitonmedic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Tennis Ace Anime Opening]

Beautifully done! The music really complimented the animation pretty well, very adorable!

Only gripe is the description you guys left here. This review spot isn't for "comments", they're for critique. That sort of stuff should be for YouTube. :)

ChannyandKimberly responds:

Oh you re right, its for critics:)! Thx

[Boom x4 test]

Please don't send test animations to the portal, while the animation is great and all but the portal is only for FINISHED works, not tests.

This has a better place in the Animation forums, so post it there instead.

[Hair Triggered Pt 1 - NUTS AMUCK 6]

"Oppressed by gravity", pffft

Definitely a good watch, good to see 3D stuff here on the portal. The animation felt a little too stiff at times, especially on that Cindy character. Love to see more, the subtle political commentary here was just hilarious, lmao

emergencysquirrel responds:

Thanks for your feedback.

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[Try ASMR : Foamy The Squirrel]

The surprise ASMR clip at the end was just priceless, lmao
Always good stuff here

[Lost POSSESSIONS]

It's pretty basic, but it was still a good watch.

It would had been better if was animated sorta in the style of asdfmovie, just animation-wise. It would really make the whole thing visually pleasing despite lack of colors. Other then that, pretty good.

Harriooo responds:

Thanks. I'm still finding my style but thanks for the constructive criticism.

[Where is Adeleine?]

Oh wow, the Japanese Kirby Twitter account were actually blocking people?
Hilarious inside jokes regardless, lol.

People just need some patience, we'll get our artist back... eventually.

KimiOmega responds:

They weren't, don't worry! Haha!
Soon she will be there!

[Basically Goku vs Jiren]

Basically my take on the whole Super anime, lmao.
Solid stuff.

[PAPER 64 #06 (FR)]

ENGLISH please. This is a English-speaking site after all, so actual translations would had saved this movie.

The choppy graphics and odd effects around makes this a pretty awkward watch. It doesn't help the movie at all when there's little to no animation around. Feels much more of a slideshow then animation. The art style has no consistency at all. There's even points of the movie where the graphics stretch out to the entire screen, which just look plain terrible to the eyes.

Definitely take measures to improve your presentation. This... was just terrible to watch.

Rkz-Production responds:

Your opinion made me question myself about the content that I create, and I sincerely thought to stop, but thinking well I thought it would be really interesting to start on good bases!

Since season 1 is already over, I sincerely intend to invest in the second one in order to offer a qualitative and coherent content.

Thank you for your comment, it helped me a lot!

[[Motion Comic] The Wallachian Library Ch. 1 - Pt. 3]

Definitely a lovely premise, only betrayed by having no sound. Sound would definitely complement the comic, as well as additional animation to emphasize certain moments (i.e. the horse stomping on the girl).

As to answer your own questions, definitely considered better tracks to better suit the themes you're going for. For dialogue, I think it's fine as long as it does not obscure the scene.

TheHereticLocomotive responds:

Sorry for the late reply. It's very difficult to add sound and I don't think I would work since the characters don't have voices, I will give it a try.

"Better tracks"? I don't have many choices in the Royalty Free Music section but I'll see what I can do...

[The Investigation Room]

...Can you even call this animation? Looks like a slideshow then animation, to be honest. Also, leave anything Patreon related out of your submissions. That's something that goes on your userpage.

The humor here... was odd, but it worked for some parts. Definitely keep trying.